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February 13
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You smiled like the ocean,
Like a wave unto the sea-
Vast as any desert
And as empty as can be.

You laughed as if the sun alit
A midnight summer sky-
Loud as any empty cave
And almost just as dry.

You cried as if the solar system
Ripped itself apart;
But I-oh, I only cried,
From a battered, broken heart.
I...have no idea what this is. 
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lillysdigitalgarden Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful, I really love your work :)
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StarlightComet Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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BackShelfSouvenir Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014
Nice piece! Great :)
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StarlightComet Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, I actually thought it sucked and was gonna scrap it XD
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BackShelfSouvenir Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014
Nah, don't. It's great! :)
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SeptemberSkies2298 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
well whatever it is it's got lovely metaphors and practically drips with emotion ;)
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StarlightComet Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, thank you!
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kidko123 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It's very nice, is what it is.
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StarlightComet Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :)
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