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it'd be better to go naked, instead

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at half-past novemeber, we took our shovels
and dug ourselves a hole. we waited til
the sun had died with you to plant
the tree.

we took our watered-down anger,
our silicone tears, and sprinkled
it around. then we set up
cardboard cutouts of ourselves
and waited for something
to happen.

he likes to think you grew into
it; likes to talk about how
you dug your roots
and stayed. i tell him he's wishing
too hard; tell him he's looking
for gold where there's nothing
but silver.

he says i've got no hope to wear,
that i'm always dressing myself
in rags layered with dust
and cynicism. i laugh and ask
what makes him think you'd stick around
for a stupid tree, when we as ourselves
should've been enough.
he says the skeletal branches kinda match your bones. 
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Kiliann's avatar
There are bits and pieces of this poem that a I can relate to and understand--other parts I don't. I think that's the beauty of poems like these. I can find meaning in some parts while others resound with another person. This is very well-written. :)